Tuesday, April 3, 2012

Blog #5 Revised Logline

A mild mannored 18 year old pill popping teenager, joins the army. His goal? To follow in his deceased father’s footsteps, and to turn his life around.

1 comment:

  1. i like it. gives it more mystery and suspense! cant wait to read it! it sounds very adventure filled and exciting! :D i like the decriptive term you used "mild mannored" very clever (:

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