(to start out with, I already elaborated the action stuff in my original blog #9)This scene takes place in the training base, where they sleep in cabins, and get used to being around eachother. This also takes place at night. The characters are going to go interact with the other characters, all they need to know is that there is action in this scene, and that they have cabins.
(The scene goes over to Erik's face at night time after a long day of training, its dark with little lighting)
ERIK: This kid has just been admitted to the military, and he has a higher rank than I do?! I'm gonna give this punk a good talkin to.
(Erik storms over with Frank to Malik and Demetri's cabin)
(Erik pushes the door open)
ERIK:(talking to Malik) Who do you think you are?! Recently admitted to the military, and already having a higher rank than I do? What makes you so great?! Huh?!
(Erik grabs Malik by the shirt and puts him against the wall)
ERIK: I'm gonna teach you a lesson you'll never forget. (Erik has a big smirk on his face)
(He then starts to repeataly punch him across the face)
(Malik keeps letting himself get hit, not defending, not moving a muscle, and staying completely quiet the whole time)
(In fear, Demetri slowly backs up to the wall with his eyes wide open)
(Malik falls to the ground all bruised up and bleeding)
MALIK: Is that all you've got?...(Malik says this with a very quiet voice, and a smirk on his face)
ERIK: You little punk!
(Erik raises his fist again, but this time Frank grabs his arm.)
FRANK: Thats enough Erik, I think he gets the point.
(Erik and Frank leave the cabin, with Erik slamming the door behind him.)
(Demetri comes over to Malik)
DEMETRI: Are you alright comrad?!
MALIK: Yeah, I'll be fine, but could you get me some water?..(Malik says this in a very faint voice)
(Demetri brings the water over to Malik)
DEMETRI: What did you ever do to him?
MALIK: I really have no idea...
(The screen fades out.)
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