Malik Madison, an 18 year old pill popping teenager, joins the army. His goal?To follow in his deceased father’s footsteps, and to turn his life around.
1.I like the concept. I think the story can take many different directions and I'm intrigued to know where you go with the script. 2. Tells everything except for whats at stake, but I don't know if it has to. I think it's kind of implied 3. Yes it's effective
I really like the story line and I think that this is a topic that will really interest a lot of different kinds of people no matter what their initial interests are. It fully incompasses what a logline should contain and tells all of the main points of the story without giving away the ending.
It sounds very real to me, i'm glad I know a little something about the main character and even more so that hes experienced the trama of a death as well as struggling drug wise. I look forward to reading more.
1.I like the concept. I think the story can take many different directions and I'm intrigued to know where you go with the script.
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3. Yes it's effective
Omg. This is amazing I cant wait to read the story. I think it sounds like a great concept and I like the main character. =D
ReplyDeleteI really like the story line and I think that this is a topic that will really interest a lot of different kinds of people no matter what their initial interests are. It fully incompasses what a logline should contain and tells all of the main points of the story without giving away the ending.
ReplyDeleteIt sounds very real to me, i'm glad I know a little something about the main character and even more so that hes experienced the trama of a death as well as struggling drug wise. I look forward to reading more.
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